I find it dark inside this anxious space,
Words fly about with no care of meaning.
Some fear to enter their own sun filled place.
I'll escape; to leave this place I'm keening.
Though the times are tough and others may pry
I'll show who I am, leave what I am not.
Help others esape. Help them not to cry.
To be who we are, we'll give it a shot.
We'll sing it out loud. We'll sing the anthem.
We'll frolic and dance, "We're free now," I say.
Fear us you may, but free we must be. Them
Others can just hide out until dooms day.
Be who you are, and stop who you're not. Love
One another and be proud like the dove.















Comments
Overall, good poem. It has a lot of potential.
(Advanced critique encouraged, yes?)
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